Well done Matthew - your cover and contents page have visibly improved from your initial drafts and you have clearly worked very hard on this project (as evidenced in your blog posts). There are still a few minor things that you could do to further improve your grade: a) always get someone to check your work for grammar and spelling errors - they make print work look a bit unprofessional, especially when they're on your cover. b) gather some audience feedback on your product and post it onto your blog. You could even respond to any ideas / improvements that they may suggest to show that you consider their opinions to be most important. Keep up the good work and you'll be most pleased with the grade that you achieve at the end of the year :-)
Well done Matthew - your cover and contents page have visibly improved from your initial drafts and you have clearly worked very hard on this project (as evidenced in your blog posts). There are still a few minor things that you could do to further improve your grade:
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b) gather some audience feedback on your product and post it onto your blog. You could even respond to any ideas / improvements that they may suggest to show that you consider their opinions to be most important.
Keep up the good work and you'll be most pleased with the grade that you achieve at the end of the year :-)