Draft 1
It’s oly been a year on since Elle brought out her first solo single “happiness” which brought her istant worldwide success placing at number one in over 20 countres. But this girl ‘aint going to stop here; no she certainly isn’t. The future is bright for this young, pop artist and ll from being inpired from a simple quote; a few wordswhich changed the matter, finl destination and of course...destiny of her life.
It was a dull and gloomy moning in Elle’s hometown Boston when she stumbled across the dusty VHS Titanic cassette. It was only after seeing the scene where Jack conjured the poer for Rose to ascend into skies when Elle heard those few simple words. Exclusively to ‘Envy she tells us “I just remember heang the phrase wilst looking into Katie Winslet’s eyes when a tune writhed it’s way out of my head an repeated over and over again.” After scribbling away on a piece of crap paper the melody was it then when the words soon shortly followed.
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Draft 2
It’s only been a year on since Elle brought out her first solo single “happiness” which brought her instant worldwide success placing at number one in over 20 countries. But this girl ‘aint going to stop here; no she certainly isn’t. The future is bright for this young, pop artist and all from being inspired from a simple quote; a few words which changed the matter, final destination and of course...destiny of her life.
It was a dull and gloomy morning in Elle’s hometown Boston when she stumbled across the dusty VHS Titanic cassette. It was only after seeing the scene where Jack conjured the power for Rose to ascend into the skies when Elle heard those few simple words. Exclusively to ‘Envy’ she tells us “I just remember hearing the phrase whilst looking into Katie Winslet’s eyes when a tune writhed it’s way out of my head and repeated over and over again.” After scribbling away on a piece of scrap paper the melody was it then when the words soon shortly followed.
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Draft 3
It’s only been a year on since Elle brought out her first solo single “happiness” which brought her instant worldwide success placing at number one in over 20 countries. But this girl ‘aint going to stop here; no she certainly isn’t. The future is bright for this young, pop artist and all from being inspired from a simple quote; a few words which changed the matter, final destination and of course...destiny of her life.
It was a dull and gloomy morning in Elle’s hometown Boston when she stumbled across the dusty VHS Titanic cassette. It was only after seeing the scene where Jack conjured the power for Rose to ascend into the skies when Elle heard those few simple words. Exclusively to ‘Envy’ she tells us “I just remember hearing the phrase whilst looking into Katie Winslet’s eyes when a tune writhed it’s way out of my head and repeated over and over again.” After scribbling away on a piece of scrap paper the melody was it then when the words soon shortly followed.
Previously to this, Elle was aspiring to be a dancer and actor in Broadway which was soon no doubt set to unravel itself in due course. But this has all been put on hold since the artist received a £5 million record deal with Simon Cowell’s record label ‘Syco.’ Elle continued to explain to ‘Envy’ “After creating the song independently at home, I just uploaded it YouTube wishing to share the joy and passion in the song that came from that 5 minute period.” Soon after uploading the amateur song, it had received well over 10 millions views which then got Simon Cowell’s attention.
