Personal Feedback & Planned Amendments Of Double Page Spread Draft 1

- Change the font of the main title into something more sleek and sexy as apposed to the heavy, block-like characters of the current title.
- Insert the story/article beneath the title.
- Move the butterfly which the model is looking at onto her hand whilst also having another butterfly on the far left-hand side speech marks.
- Add in arrow on the right page to suggest that the article continues onto the second page, which it does.